Book Review - Heaven's Fate

Thame Elliot's one objective in life is to avenge his father's death and he is consumed in his quest for the truth. But his life is not that simple. His aunt is the new Empress of Eoida and is always meddling in his life. Being connected with her also brings him enough fame to make his quest problematic and as if this is not enough, soon he will know that sometimes things are not always as they seem.

Can he find his father's killer?

Heaven's Fate is the classic fantasy story of a boy whose father was killed and claimed a traitor. Now he is determined to clear his name and also avenge his death. The first thing that struck me about the book was the whole planning and conception of Thame's world. The author has meticulously planned each detail of his fantasy world and it shows.

The story changes pace as per the demand of the story which is a good thing. Fantasy book lovers will love this book. I am not that a big fan of fantasy books but was still pulled into the action. I did though feel a bit crammed which so many new things in the book.

All in all, a very promising book and very admirably executed by Andre Alan. I give Heaven's Fate a 4 out of 5 and recommend that you read it. A book with loads of action which will thrill you and excite you. I look forward to reading more of Andre's work.  :)

I was provided the book by the author for my review of it and I am very thankful to him. The above review is my honest and unbiased opinion and in no way influenced.

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Part II – The Peach and the Mage

The Power Array Saga

Tales of the Sword and the Peach

A dragon flew through the air. Momotaru lifted his head to the heavens hearing the shrill cry and caught a glance of the large flying reptile. He sat low on the brown horse galloping down London Street. Faces dashed by at a blur. Coming up in a few blocks was the popular, 21 Jump Street - nick named because of the youths standing on the corner dancing to music blaring from a portable stereo with large, square speakers.  

Several blocks down the street, a youth dressed in a dark blue robe with a large hood barreled around the corner. The blue cloaked youth slammed into one of the dancing performers. Colliding bodies collapsed to the cardboard spread across the cement sidewalk. Taller men with dark grey hoods covering their face in deep shadows floated after the blue cloaked youth who wore a piece of string as a belt. The grey hooded mage in front of the group raised his hand and the blue cloaked youth rose into the air as if picked up by an invisible hand.

Momotaru’s hand went to his sword, reacting on instinct. He paused, how could he fight magic, thought Momotaru. He could not forget the group of thugs hot on his trail.

One of the mages in the group whispered on the edge of hearing and they turned to walk away. The blue cloaked youth screamed out for help, hood falling away. He struggled against the invisible, magic bounds that held him aloft. Short, spiky, purple hair and large dark eyes met with Momotaru’s.

Momotaru rode past, ignoring the pleas for help. He was no hero; this business was none of his. It pained him to turn his eyes away and focus on steering his horse through the crowded streets.

The boy would surely be killed.

One of the young street performers that was knocked over by the blue hooded mage, stood and shouted to the retreating grey cloaks. A blood curdling scream followed. Momotaru looked over his shoulder to witness bodies exploding. The last young dancer stood shaking in his boots, pants reeking of feces, too stunned to move. The lead mage lifted his hand while his comrades wore a callous grin.

Against his better judgment, Momotaru found himself wheeling his horse around, the beast sneering and whinnying in protest at the abrupt change in direction. He wove between the pursuing street thugs sitting atop their tiger mounts. They swung at him with lazy sword thrust and rusted daggers that he deflected easily with his forty inch, pitch black, adamantite, straight blade. Momotaru swept past the mage, close enough to send his cloak billowing out in ruffles.   

The mage standing on the corner tried to cast a spell and destroy the last youth of the 21 Jump Street dancers. The mage tried to wiggle his fingers and cast a spell yet to his surprise, there was no response. His face held a questioning expression wondering why the young man was still alive. The mage looked down and realized his hand was no longer attached to his wrist; it lay lifeless on the dirt road.

Sending the horse careening off alone, Momotaru flipped off the back of the steed to land nimbly on his feet, sword poised defensively in front of him.

Mages pulled out daggers and sinuous Kris; meager weapons used for rituals that would prove futile. They rushed forward, shouting and casting arcane bolts that lit up the street with white lightening. Bystanders that had not fled the scene already stampeded away from the powerful combatants, turning the busy London Street into a ghost town.

Flipping through the air to avoid streaks of lightening, Momotaru cut his way through the first few mages in order to get the ones in back forming a summoning circle. Purple light glowed around the remaining mages who formed a triangle. A dark whole in the ground grew darker. A shadow crept towards the opening, accompanied by hellish sounds from the underworld. Before the mages could finish, one mage lost an arm and screamed before the sword plunged into his throat. The other mage broke into a mad dash but fell to his knees, only to look down at twenty centimeters of cold, dark steel protruding through his chest. Momotaru yanked the sword back on a thin string hidden in the hilt of the weapon. He let the last mage run.

The grey hooded man almost made it around the corner before a lance of white hot energy struck the retreating mage in the back. Following the line of the long, thin energy of light, Momotaru watched the energy beam dissipate from the outstretched palm of the young man with spiky purple hair. The young mage wore a coy smile and shrugged his shoulders.

            The tiger riding gang members watched the fight scene play out. Each of them looked to their leader for an idea of what to do next. They had no choice but to throw angry glances over their shoulder and follow when the leader galloped away in the opposite direction.

Momotaru put his green, conical hat back on his head that had fallen during the fighting. He stepped over the bloody mess. The one remaining dancing boy stood watching, shocked and silent until Momotaru lit a cigar. The young dancer collapsed among the dead, unconscious.

            The spikey haired mage ran to Momotaru, “My life is in your hands, kind swordsman.” The olive skinned youth with dingy purple hair wore a bright smile.

Momotaru looked at him, blew out a puff of smoke and continued walking.

The mage had no choice but to follow behind Thame. They walked along silently for many blocks. Finally he asked, “Are you heading out of town?”

“Shower,” replied Momotaru.

“They will come for you,” said the young mage, moving his legs fast to keep up with Momotaru’s long strides. His dingy, thick, cotton robe whooshed softly as the mage pumped his arms, trying to keep pace.

“They won’t be the first or the last,” said Momotaru. “Whoever they are.”

The olive toned, baby faced mage paused for a moment, thoughtful expression before changing subjects. “Your sword.”

It sounded like it was more of a question yet Momotaru remained silent.

“If you help me take down the Mage Monolith I will enchant your sword,” said the purple haired youth. “They will come for you…, the mages. There is no doubt about it, when those Adept mages don’t come back they will scry the truth…,” he paused, licking his pink lips. “But if you help me to strike first and return to the Mage Monolith in order to gain the Knowledge Transfer spell; it will be worth your while.”

“Not interested,” responded Momotaru turning down an alley, trying to get away from the annoying young mage.

The purple haired mage scampered around to stand in front of Momotaru. He stopped with arms outstretched.

Coming to a halt, frustrated, Momotaru stared down at the stubborn child in front of him with a threatening gaze. The luck of the Gods was with Momotaru this day. He caught the reflection of two elven swordsmen in the young mage’s dark eyes. Like a ray of light, Momotaru turned and slashed through the lead swordsman. The other could not get his guard up in time as Momotaru sliced an X across his back that sheered through ribs, and backbone.

The dead swordsman hit the side of a building and slid to the ground. The Aver City Guards badge clanged to the floor.

The young mage voiced Momotaru’s thoughts, “You have to leave the city now.”

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The Peach and the Tiger

The Power Array Saga

By Andre Alan 
 

The Sword and the Peach

Momotaru left the brothel through a side exit that led to a narrow alley. Leave it to the

Sun Elves to somehow make hot, forbidden monk sex seem almost clean. The capital elven city,

Aver, sparkled as he walked toward the major road. No casually discarded cans or forgotten candy wrappers like the human cities. He decided to spruce the place up with a bit of human charm and flung his smoldering cigar onto the cement paved ground.

A homeless man, with a long unkempt beard and bare feet that resembled something more akin to claws, rested against the wall of the building adjacent to the brothel. His eyes brightened at the still lit cigar and he quickly scrambled over to it, hungrily inhaling on the butt before the embers died out of the tobacco leaf.

“Got any more?” asked the disheveled individual. He had a hint of black hair that was mostly grey in long scraggily hair.

Momotaru shrugged without slowing his pace.

“You know they will catch you eventually. You better be careful or this really will be your last one.”

Momotaru spun around furrowing his brow, hand hovering over the pommel of the katana that hung at his waist. He debated whether or not to make this poor individual explain himself further, but the old man ran off giggling and coughing, still trying to pull on the dying cigar. Momotaru put the deranged individual out of his thoughts, turning the corner onto London Street, the busiest street in Aver.

It seemed like even the mighty Sun Elves could not fully eradicate the homeless epidemic, especially with hundreds of refugees pouring onto the shores of the 400,000 kilometer long island. Humans routinely referred to the Sun Elves as High Elves which had long ago stopped caring about the other races that lived on Threa’s surface. Instead, the High elves had used their magic to create gigantic floating cities. Worshipping their sun Gods, the hovering citadels controlled by the High Elves gathered solar energy and harnessed it. Unfortunately for the people that lived on the land below, they were relegated to artificial light that streaked down from the underbelly of the ebon-skinned elves’ floating town.

Momotaru slowed as he strolled past a wooden cart with robes and hats hanging from hooks and display shelves. One item stood out to Momotaru: a dark green, conical hat. The merchant noticed him and began rubbing his hands in anticipation of the sale.

“This hat was created by the master craftsman De Pono himself in B.E.D. 2003, and it’s believed by some to be imbued with special creative thinking powers. The stories tell it that he was inspired to create this hat after meeting the Enigma Twins outside Tundra Mountain. You seem like the type to have a green hat, yes?” said the merchant.

“How much?” asked Momotaru.

“I will cut you a deal, good sir. Ten credits, how’s about, yes?”

“I think I’ll keep walking.”

“Ah ha, uh wait, this hat is special, yes?”

“All the items in your shop are not worth ten credits.”

The merchant jumped from behind his cart, carrying the hat with him. “Seven credits, my friend. It is the lowest I can go on such an item of this high quality; I am practically giving away a national treasure, good sir. At least try it on and see how it fits, yes?”

A fine hat indeed, Momotaru could not argue that fact and finally consented. Besides, the money he was spending was not really his own, and his father had very deep pockets.

The old man smiled from ear to ear, all the while bowing and praising him for making such a fine purchase. The man’s accent was from the country Villus, across the Northern Mizuki Ocean and was as thick as the grease in his jet black hair and oiled beard.

From the reflection of the mirrors, Momotaru could see a group of rough young men gathered on the other side of the road.

“If I were you, I would put that hat on and hide, newcomer,” said the merchant.

“Thanks, but I think I will take my chances,” replied Momotaru. “These shirks are known to me.”

“Well, good day to you then, sir,” said the merchant. “I need to prepare my offering.”

“Offering?”

“Nothing… never mind. I have said too much already.”

The merchant disappeared behind his cart, kneeling to rifle within the hidden compartments. Momotaru could hear the sound of coins clanking together. Part of his unique skills, obtained by working with his father’s business, was that Momotaru could determine the value of credits based on the sound of the platinum, gold and iron clinking against one another; well over one thousand credits were placed into a small bag.

Across the street, a small group of teenage thugs sat astride giant cats. The Felidae Gang. The large felines, larger than the average horse, had two large fangs protruding from their mouths. The members of the gang each tattooed a paw print on the right side of their faces. The lower ranking members of the group rode upon the more common orange-and-black-striped felidae. Their leader rode a rare white furred tiger with black stripes. The man wore a white bandana tied around his forehead; dark eyes looked out over a jutting nose that could act as a spear.

The leader dismounted from his felidae, patted the large cat on its head and gave it a kiss on its wet nose. The animal yawned widely, and stretched, arching its back deeply as its paws extended forward. The beast sat down on its haunches and proceeded to clean itself.

The leader walked over to the merchant without saying a word, merely extending his hand. The merchant tossed the man the bag full of credits.

“What are you looking at,” asked the leader, addressing Momotaru.

“Teenage scum that should give this man back his hard-earned money.” Momotaru viewed the boy through slanted eyes.

“Mind your own damn business,” said the leader. Two of the gang members walked over to stand between Momotaru and their boss. The boss leaned over the cart to grab the merchant by his collar, and then whispered something he couldn’t hear.

“Move along here,” said one of the low ranking members.

Momotaru shifted his weight slightly as his hand rested on the katana at his waist.

“This doesn’t concern you,” said the gang member as he crossed arms the size of tree trunks across a broad chest.

“I’m sure the elves would be concerned,” said Momotaru.

“You must be new here. Elves don’t give a crap about us humans. Long as we stay out of their way. Now stay out of our way before we take a concerning to your wellbeing, if you catch my drift.”

“What?” shouted the merchant, trying to break free from the grasp of the gang leader. “You can’t do that.”

“Watch me,” said the leader with a nod to his comrades.

They hopped on their tigers and strolled down the street.

The merchant was mumbling to himself, bewilderment and fear in his eyes, which kept flicking back and forth from the hat on Momotaru’s head, to the sword at his waist and then back down to the items in his cart as he shook his head.

“I will get the money back for you,” said Momotaru, who could not help but feel responsible. Besides, what was the point of having a weapon and all his years training as a monk if you were not going to use it?

As Momotaru walked away he could have sworn the merchant said something that sounded like, “No, you will end up in a hearse,” or maybe it was, “No, you will just make things worse.” Either way, his mind was made up and he was on the move. Momotaru yelled after the gang strolling away on their tiger mounts.

“Hey kid,” said Momotaru.

The leader spared a glance over his shoulder, yet kept moving forward, forcing Momotaru to run after them. Once he caught up, Momotaru yanked the youth off the back of his tiger mount, pinning him to the ground with a foot on his throat. Momotaru unsheathed his adamantite black metal sword. With the tip of the katana drawing a small point of blood on the gang leader’s cheek, he said, “Give that man back the money you stole.”

“You have just made the biggest mistake of your life,” said the gang leader through clenched teeth.

The other members dismounted, and began unsheathing the varied assortment of daggers and knives strapped to their waists.

“One more step and he dies,” said Momotaru, as his blade hovered millimeters from the man’s eye.

“Don’t move,” said the leader. “Oz, give him the damn credits.”

“But Jobs…”

“But nothing. Give it over, damnit!” shouted the gang leader, Jobs.

Oz, who wore an eye patch tossed the brown, well-used bag full of coins.

Catching it with his free hand, Momotaru secured it to the open satchel on his belt. He slowly began moving away, leaving the steel pressed to Jobs cheek for as long as possible. Then he was running at full speed, Momotaru tossed the merchant the bag. He glanced over his shoulder and the Felidae gang was riding their tigers hard after him. The brothel’s stable was full of parked horses. He ran into the stable delivering a devastating body blow to the stable boy that left him curled into a ball, groaning. Momotaru leapt onto the back of a glistening brown horse. They wheeled around and charged down the street. He could hear the tigers roaring only meters behind him, with their masters shouting about what they would do once they caught him.

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Writing Apology

I must apologize for not putting anything up here in so long. A friend of mine challenged me to create as much content in thirty days as possible. So with that being said, it was time to “man-up” and accept the challenge and get to writing. 

If you’re a writer then get to writing because only writing does writing. The words won’t appear out of thin air and onto the page (unless you have some special skill, if so, I NEED IT). I have so many ideas about stories that I want to write that it is hard to find time to do all of the little things that need to be done. But in preparation for a new short story series titled “The Power Array Saga” (download Part One from the EVapor ENT company website – link below) I have been trying to stay within a certain state of mind. 

When I say that, I do not mean that I am trying to stay intoxicated for the entire day from some foreign or toxic substance but I do want to try and stay intoxicated with writing. It is very difficult to put myself into the “writer-mode” and rip off over a thousand words without being distracted by something. People have real lives which intrude upon the inner worlds that we have created. 

To all the writers out there, my advice to you is to try and stay intoxicated off the fantasy worlds and interesting characters that you have created. Not everyone has the skill that some of us science fiction, fantasy writers have so be thankful for you gift and get back to writing.

~ Andre Alan

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